Top 10 News Release Mistakes
We want to approve your press release for distribution the first time. However, that is not always possible. Simple mistakes can have chilling effects, and as your partner in press release distribution we cannot ignore them. The following is a list of the top 10 common press release mistakes observed by the PR Leap editorial team:
1. Backdated
Our distribution partners typically do not pick up a press release that includes a date in the lead paragraph (first person) earlier than the actual release date. The PR Leap system automatically stamps the release date for you, so it is not necessary to include it again. But if you prefer to include a date, make sure that it syncs with the actual release date.
Effect: Limits distribution
2. First Person
A press release should read like a news story. News stories are written in third person. The only time your press release should contain pronouns such as I, we, us, or, your, etc. is when you are quoting someone. Opinions should only be expressed within quotation marks. Remember the reason publicity is so effective is because it does not read like an advertisement.
Issue: Creditability
3. Duplicates
At the moment it is not possible to target multiple industries. Duplicate (or substantially similar) submissions of another press release already in the system will not be accepted.
We understand not being able to target multiple industries is a shortcoming of the system. But we ask that you be patient with us until this option is made available.
In addition, if a press release has been previously released on Business Wire, PR Newswire, or PR Web, and was already included into Google News, then it is most likely not going to be included again.
4. Length
Our distribution partners typically do not pick up a press release that is too short (less than 150 words or so), or too long (more than two pages or 500 words). Press releases that are too short tend to read like advertisements and are not considered newsworthy.
Effect: Limits distribution, creditability
5. Newsworthy
What is the news event?
For the media to consider your announcement newsworthy it must have a strong news angle and be interesting. The angle (or news peg) is the story hook; the news event; the controlling issue; the reason for the media to publish your story. Your news release should be written objectively and in third person. Remember, publicity is not advertising. Your news release needs tell people your story. For more information, read http://prleap.com/resources/on-writing-news-releases.html
Effect: Limits distribution, creditability
6. Reader Opinions + Op-Ed
Submissions that are written, as Reader Opinions, Op-Ed, or Open Letters for the media, are not accepted. PR Leap is a news release distribution service. Remember a news release should be written objectively and in third person.
7. Articles
PR Leap does not accept Articles.
You are welcomed to write a news release announcing your article or new web content. Make sure to include excerpts or quotes, and a link to the full story.
8. All Caps
It is unprofessional to write a press release in all uppercase characters (it gives the impression of shouting). The headline and body of your press release should be in proper case. The only time you should use all uppercase characters is for strong emphasis, which should be used in moderation, i.e., no more than a few consecutive words in all caps. PR Leap does not accept press releases written entirely in uppercase characters.
Effect: Difficult to read
9. Headline
The headline of your press release should convey a snapshot of what it is about. Your headline is the first, and often the only, thing an editor reads. Headlines must immediately grab the readers’ attention otherwise your press release is dead. Common headline errors:
- One-word headlines are unacceptable
- Do not use all caps or exclamation points
- It is not necessary to include “For Immediate Release” when distributing via the internet
- For search engine optimization purposes: Limit your headline to no more than 65 characters
10. Excessive Links
Including links in your press release should always be done in moderation. Having an excessive amount of links in the body of a press release is distracting for the reader. In addition, stuffing the bottom of your release with a list of links that provide no news value is unacceptable.










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11 responses so far ↓
Bill Byron - Denver, Colorado // Mar 31, 2007 at 1:36 pm
This was helpful for a newby like me who likes to write relevant content about my business. Although it’s common sense from English 101 years ago…it’s always good for a re-fresher like this article! Thanks.
Heather Davis // Apr 12, 2007 at 8:41 am
Very well organized and content rich. I was able to skip around to the points I needed. I’m very happy I stumbled upon this site. The all caps issue is a pet peeve of mine. I’ve had too many sales reps write to me using all caps.
Darren Chabluk // May 5, 2007 at 6:19 pm
Nice article on how to write a pr.
Garry McGillivary // May 24, 2007 at 5:17 pm
Exactly what I was looking for being new to the PR world.
Tom Slage // May 25, 2007 at 11:47 am
Excellent article. Thanks so much for the invaluable advice!
Colin Daviau // May 30, 2007 at 1:15 pm
THIS IS REALLY GOOD ADVICE, I AGREE WITH MOST OF IT!!! Goofs aside, this is good stuff. Keep it real and to the point. Rock on PR peeps.
James Lee Valentine / Empowered Millionaire Success Systems // May 31, 2007 at 9:12 pm
Great advice. It always seems amazing as to why more people don’t research professional advice like this before diving in… guess it’s the “want it now” mentality!
More power!
James Lee Valentine
Program Developer
Empowered Millionaire Success Systems
http://www.empoweredmillionaire.com
Alain Tanguay // Jun 11, 2007 at 7:03 am
Very informative. This is exactly what I needed
to write an effective PR.
Christy RM // Jun 12, 2007 at 4:15 am
Oh it was nice enough to warn about the prospective pitfalls while publishing. Thanks you so much to all friends at Prleap.com
Connie Walcott // Jun 13, 2007 at 12:08 pm
Thank-you for this invaluable information! This will make writing my first news release a much easier task.
Thanks for your insight and assistance,
Connie
Charles Benninghoff // Jun 17, 2007 at 8:19 am
TYPO: Please remove this comment after making correction (we all err, don’t we?):
In item 3: In addition, if a press release has been previously released on Business Wire, PR Newswire, or PR Web, and was already included into Google News, than it is most likely not going to be included again.
Should be …, then it is most…
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